a cool idea but i don't want to waste it

it has to be perfect

it features the song "be still with me" by imogen heap

it involves basically spock or another character who can easily detect his GF's presence i guess it could work for jim too.


basically spock is separated from everyone, which  i suppose is the plot for the movie,

but this could easily be used in another film or even a tv show if done correctly.

it really needs to feature the entire song pretty much so there needs to be enough time for the emotions and quietness of the characters.

so first spock is standing in a crowd and he has his hands on his head  and there's  a circle shot of him trying to figure something out and he's pretty much almost in tears. pretty slowly

something is really bothering him severely

a choice he made

or the fact that he's alone

or maybe he's in pain (physical pain)

it stops on the right side of his body
after a while and he straightens

and he begins walking and then running

running towards something

but there are shots of him sitting in meditation

and uhura glancing at kirk and kirk glancing back worried

basically like any of these characters can be substituted because it doesn't have to be star trek

there's a time lapse sequence of him standing in one place looking confused

blue and green fresh eyes on me --- flash back to original meeting

maybe meeting himself in the future

he lost his planet
he lost his mom
he lost himself

he's distraught

and so he just sits down and meditates lost

end....